Use the links to the right to read each student’s writing.
Student’s please write a paragraph of response. This should include 4 – 6 specific things you liked. For example, I really liked the end. The words ” insert quote from writing ” seemed to tie things together nicely. The end lingered, too, I found myself thinking about your story after I had finished. You could also make a polite suggestion for a change. But, even more informative to the author, ask a question or two or three. Some of the writings have holes in the narrative – asks what happened to such and such a character, or what’s with a particular object. Give feedback that will inspire the author.