Reflection Letter

Dear Students,

Please send me an e-mail in letter format:  an opening; a body with single spacing within the paragraphs and double between paragraphs; a closing (sincerely, with love, yours truly); size 12 font and a minimum of three (3) paragraphs.  I am typing this blog post in the format.

Each of the following paragraphs are filled with questions to get you thinking.  You do not have to answer every question.  You do, however, need to write in complete sentences and paragraphs with topic sentences and supporting details.  There is only one question that I want you to answer and it is in the last paragraph.

In a paragraph describe your history as a writer.  What did you think about writing before I was your teacher (grades K-5)?  Do you remember learning to write?  Who taught you?  How did you feel about writing stories?  Can you recall a piece of writing from then?  How do you feel about writing from sixth grade to now?  Describe your history as best you can.

In another paragraph  – describe who you are as a writer right now.  We wrote a lot in this room.  How do you feel about what you did last year?  Are you proud? disappointed?  After re-reading your writing from last year – do you like it?  How did it feel to finish a piece of writing last year?  What was the writing process like:  did you waste time, not have enough time, struggle, write fast . . . etc.

Now, reflecting on everything you’re written so far, give yourself some writing goals.  It could be writing in a different genre; or writing non-fiction; or fiction; or poetry; or something else.  Do you need to write more dialogue or less.  Do you write in sentences and paragraphs or do you make lots of revisions?  Do you want to enter writing contests? What do you think about sharing your writing with other students outside of our school?

Finally, make sure you answer this question somewhere in your letter,  what skills do you think you need to improve your writing?

Have fun, do good work and I’ll see you Thursday.

Love, Ms. Suzanne

 

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Expectations for Writing Workshop

  • Find topics and a purpose to write – that matters to YOU, to your life, to who you are and who you want to be.
  • Try new topics, purposes, audiences, genres, forms and techniques.
  • Make your own decisions about what is working and needs more work in pieces of writing.  Be the “First Responder” to your writing.
  • Recognize that reader’s eyes and minds need your writing to be conventional in format, spelling, punctuation, and usage.
  • Attempt professional publication and/or enter writing contests.
  • Produce a plethora of finished and unfinished writing.
  • Listen to, ask questions about, and comment on other’s writing in ways that help them move the writing forward.
  • Take a deliberate stance toward writing well.
  • Establish and work toward significant, relevant goals for yourself as a writer.
  • Work as hard in writing workshop as I do.  Recreate happy times from your life, work through sad times, discover what you know about a subject and learn more, convey information and request it, parody, petition, play, explore, argue, apologize, advise, sympathize, imagine, look and look again, express love, show gratitude, and make money!
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Writing Workshop 2012 – Rules

Welcome!  I’m excited to get writing!  If you’re in 10, 11, or 12th grade, please look over last year’s writing and revise; or create a new piece of writing.  Freshman (9th graders) start writing!

Rules of Writing Workshop:

  • Use this time to write
  • If you have a question, whisper when asking.
  • Use resources available to you quickly – avoid rabbit trails.
  • Write, write, and then write some more!
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Poetry Portfolio

For your final poetry assignment, I want you to write just one more poem and gather all that you have written into a portfolio.

The portfolio will include:

The final poem should be 14 – 16 lines, may or may not rhyme, experiment with style, could be a sonnet, could be modeled from one of the many poems we read.  Should include some figurative language:  simile, metaphor, personification, alliteration, imagery.

 

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Bio Poems

How to Write a Bio Poem

 

Line 1:  First Name

Line 2:  Four descriptive traits (adjectives)

Line 3:  Sibling of . ..

Line 4:  Lover of

Line 5:  Who fears . . .

Line 6:  Who needs . . .

Line 7:  Who gives . . .

Line 8:  Who would like to see . . .

Line 9:  Resident of . . .

Line 10:  Last name

 

 

Students need to write at least 2 of these bio poems – using different information, trying to rhyme and using alliteration!

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Metaphors

A metaphor is a comparison between two unlike things without using the words like or as.  The writer simply states that one thing is something else or implies the comparison.

Examples:

  • A babies laughter is a precious gift.
  • Failure is a kite-eating tree.
  • Parents are the engine of a child’s life.
  • Loneliness an empty box of Cracker-Jacks after the circus leaves.

Post two of your best, worst, or funniest metaphors.

Then write a short extended metaphor poem of around 4 lines.  Here is an example – it’s longer than 4 lines, but very good.

Life is a river going to the ocean

Born in the mountains, from the land

Flowing flowing never stopping motion.

Things try to slow the trip, like gravel and sand

But gravity takes hold and life gets quick

Sad, happy, sit, walk

Life is life there is no trick

In the end, it’s a pine box.

 

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Sonnets

A sonnet contains 14 lines, arraigned with 8 lines in the rhyming patter of a b b a, a b b a, and six lines of c d c d c d .  Scholars believe the form originally came from Italian and “sonnet” meant little song.  The English sonnet is also written in iambic pentameter – da dum, da dum, da dum, da dum, da dum.

Some outstanding examples:

Sonnet 27 by Williamn Shakespeare

Sonnet 30 by Edna St. Vincent Millay

Sonnet 29 by Edna St. Vincent Millay

What My Lips Have Kissed . . . by Edna St. Vincent Millay

One Art by Eliazbeth Bishop (in the Villanelle form)

Theory by Dorothy Parker

Summons by Robert Francis 

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Rhythm

“We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks

Read Aloud – ask yourself when should you pause and why /  what words to stress and why / how do the white spaces affect this poem?

We will listen to this poem aloud.  After, what did you think of the poets reading and comments?

 

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Student Poems

Look here for student poems:

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Figurative Language

Focus Question:  What poetic devices do poets use?  Answer:  they use figurative language like:  imagery, simile, metaphor, onomatopoeia, personification, allusion

Poems with figurative language:

“My Papa’s Waltz” by Thedore Roethke

“Young” by Anne Sexton

“In Memoriam” by Lord Alfred Tennyson

“Ode to Family Photographs” by Gary Soto

“We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks

“Eviction (originally titled The First)” by Lucille Clifton

“The Highwayman” by Alfred Noyes

“The Negro Speaks of Rivers” by Langston Hughes

 

 

 

 

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